Hello,
I had a beautiful day. This morning, I watched some episodes of Grey's anatomy, a TV series I like very much. I don't know why. Maybe it's because the surgeons are sensitive about what their patients are feeling. The relationship between doctors and patients is moving. The vulnerability of the characters is real: they share every little things that makes life so interesting. The sickness in life is described very well. Above all, there are love stories Oooooooh Dr Mc Dreamy. The friendship between some of the characters is precious.For me friendship can be my life jacket when everything around seems to collapse. When I was sad, my friends helped me with their advice and their caring presences.
Ok. My assigment is done for now. So, I'm going to make some artistic bookmarks with my friend Flo.
Cheers,
M aka Miss Mc Dreamy
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Excellent post! Many of your sentences sound like they were written by a native speaker. I'm very impressed!
I haven't seen Grey's Anatomy yet, but I know a few people who never miss it.
I started watching Six Feet Under a little while ago, like you suggested. It's really good! We're already through the first season.
Anyway, here are some small corrections:
* "I listened to some episodes" should be "I watched some episodes".
* It's "TV series" (You were very close!)
* "The vulnerability of people" should be "the vulnerability of the people", or, better still, "the vulnerability of the characters".
* "They share every little thing" instead of "things".
* "The effects of sickness" instead of "the sickness".
* "advices" should be "advice" (It's an irregular conjugation.)
Hi Mark!
My friend Floriane helped me to write some sentences. She's better than me because she used english in his jobs and she reads english texts for his studies. His help had been very appreciate tonight.
Thanks for your corrections.
I'll correct your text very soon.
Good night,
M
Great blog, Miss McDreamy! I don't understand why women love Grey's Anatomy so much! Since the other Mark already fixed all of your mistakes, I guess I don't have to! Does this mean I have to start up a French blog now too? I look forward to reading your posts!
Hi Saskatoon Mark!
I hope you're not too tired. Teachers works very hard all day long. Be patient! Summer and holidays arrives. ;-)
If you want, you can create your blog in french. But, if you don't, I will understand. The end of the year is a very busy time for teachers. ;-)
Good night,
See you at karaoke if Ed wants to go there,
M
Hi little Miss sunshine,
I take the freedom to call you like that, even if I haven't seen the picture, actually. So, you like Grey's anatomy, heh?
I must say I'm quite found of it, too. My favorite character is Izzie, by the way. Don't you think that the actress who plays the role is amazing? weel, this is it for tonight. Take care :-)
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