Hi everybody!
Today, I lost many things at work: a CD of Daniel Bélanger, one of my favorite singers, my coffee. Yes! Returning from holidays is not easy. ;-) Fortunately, I found what I had lost. My coffee was nearer than some outfits at the store and my CD was under another object in my desk. My co-worker laughed about my adventures. He said that I was a little bit crazy. I agree with him. ;-) I'm off tomorrow. I think I'll sleep all day long. Maybe I'll read my english book. I forgot: I will use my computer for the work. I must organize games for the birthday party at the store. I like this task. It's perfect for a teacher, which I am in my soul.
I need advices for my sentences. I don't know if they're good.
Cheers,
My brain does'nt work now.
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hi lady Lachapelle,
I'm proud of your guts, because that's a good way to improve your skills.
We'll I'm better at talking than writing, but, still, i've wanted to reply to your first message. Enjoy your forthcomings exchanges, and Happy blog!
Congratulations on the new blog! You've already improved so much; I think becoming a blogger will make you bilingual even faster.
Thank you, again, for correcting my French on my blog. Here are some corrections for you:
* "a cd's" should become "a CD". (Did you lose more than one CD? If so, then it should be "CDs", without an article or apostrophe.)
* "The return of the holidays is not easy" should be "the return from holidays was not easy," or, more gracefully, "returning from holidays is not easy."
("Return of" implies that the holidays have arrived, "return from" means the holidays have finished.)
* "I'm agree with him" should be "I agree with him." ("I am" is required for progressive tense conjugations, but not for the present tense.)
* "I think I'll slept all day long" is almost right, but you don't need to conjugate "sleep" since "will" already puts your sentence in the future tense. ("Slept" is the simple past and past participle of "sleep".)
* The next sentence should also be in the future tense: "Maybe I'll read my..."
* "for the work" should be "for work."
* "What I am in my soul" should be "which I am in my soul."
That's it! :-)
Best of luck! I'll see you at our next language exchange!
Oops! I forgot a couple of things.
* CD should be in capital letters, since it's an acronym for "compact disc."
* "I need advices" should be "I need advice".
I really like your blog! I've linked to it from from my site. Keep up the great work. :-)
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