Montreal is a great city. I'm sure about that. Today, I don't didn't work today. I took my Harley pedalson ;-) and I went to my favorite park in Montreal (the most nearer park of where I living), the Molson park. It was great. I ate a sandwich and drunk drank a tasty V8. I wrote in my diary, read a little bit and observed the people. Time wasn't not important today. Friday, I bought a new finger puppet for my work. When I receive a Day care center at the visits my store I must explain to the kids how the first teddy bear is was born and how you to build a teddy bear one themselves. I use my finger puppet to help explain this. Now, I have two finger puppets: Kiki BBQ is a monkey and the other is a funny alien called Djabu Djabu.
Cheers,
Mélanie
Last night, I went to karaoke with my co-workers. I like karaoke. Everybody sings sang and I laughed all the time.
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I don't think I've ever been to Molson Park. It sounds like a great place!
Although it's a little wet today, the weather has been perfect for a picnic recently. I really ought to eat lunch outdoors more often, especially since I live very close to Mount Royal.
I had to chuckle over your "Harley Pedelson." :-) That's a great name! I really ought to buy a helmet so I can take mine out for a ride now and then.
Anyway, here are some small corrections:
* I didn't work today
You could also say "Today was a day off for me."
* I ate a sandwich and drank a tasty V8
An indefinite article is necessary before most countable nouns. The simple past conjugation of "drink" is "drank." ("Drunk" is the past participle.)
* ... and observed the people.
The last item in a list needs the conjunction "and" for some reason. :-)
* Time wasn't important today
"Wasn't not" is a double-negative.
* When a day care centre visits my store, I must explain to the kids how the first teddy bear was born and how to build one themselves. I use my finger puppet to help explain this.
This is a complicated correction, so let me know if you have any questions about the specifics. :-)
* Everybody sang and I laughed all the time.
Karaoke is great fun! Did you go to the same place as last time, or did you find somewhere new?
Have a great day!
Hi Mark!
Helmet is a very important when you use your bicycle in Montreal. If you're injuried, the head is the most important body part you need to protect. ;-)
For the karaoke, I went to the same place. It's a great place.
I can practice my english when I go there because nobody speaks french.
See you soon,
Thank you for your corrections.
;-)
No one spoke French there? Yikes! I can't imagine anywhere in the service industry hiring employees without a functional proficiency in French.
It might be a tough for me to find work here because of that, but I knew that before I moved. I hope that running my own business will make it easier for me to earn a living while learning a new language!
Anyway, I forgot to correct the English in parenthesis: (the park nearest to where I live) or, alternatively (the closest park to where I live).
I hope your day is going well, despite the rain and thunder. :-)
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